The graph compares the number of British emigrants to five different countries during 2004 and 2007.
It is clear from the bar chart Australia was the most favorite destination for emigrants from the UK during the research period. Additionally, 2006 by far was the year with the highest number of people leaving England.
In 2004. More than 40,000 immigrants went to Australia were from England, compared to 35,000 British people chose Spain as their destination. By contrast, the immigration figures for New Zealand, the USA and France were significantly lower, at around 22,000 British people went to each countries. In 2005, while the number of British emigrants in Spain and New Zealand remained unchanged, the figure for France witnessed a 10,000 rise to 32,000 people.
By 2006, the number of British emigrants went to Australia increased to more than 50,000 people. In the same year, Spain and New Zealand migrants figures stayed at the same level, whereas France's figure declined to around 26,000 British emigrants. In 2007, decreases were witnessed in all figures in the graph, and the most dramatic changes were occurred in Australia and France.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22994652406 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57493155775 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550802139037 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1498517198 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779088023307 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047135480722 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401078055789 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636735379063 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310025160888 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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