IELTS Writing Task 1: Percentages of Sodium, Saturated Fats, Sugars in Meals
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the american consumption of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in terms of percentage in the average meal. Overall, dinner contains the highest proportion of sodium and fat while added sugar is consumed most for snacks.
Initially, the amount of sodium and saturated fat for dinner takes up 43% and 37% respectively. sugar quantity for this sector is only 23%. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at nutrition proportion for snacks. The sector accounts for 42% added sugar, whereas the percentages for sodium and saturated fat are lower, at 14% and 21% one by one.
Turning to the remaining sectors we can see that for breakfast the amount of fat is the same as that of sugar at 16% and higher than sodium (14%) Moreover, the american tend to consume less the three nutrients at lunch. The figures are 29%, 26% and 19% in respective order.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sugar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2009569378 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.5786231349 2.65546596893 323% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 125.687549105 43.030603864 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.6 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180717864424 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696501740739 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530222266734 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081708198741 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837835807202 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.68 11.4140731707 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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