The illustration demonstrates the various stages undertaken in order to produce leather products.
The illustration demonstrates the various stages undertaken in order to produce leather products.
Overall, the animal skin passes through ten different steps until the final goods created. Also, in order to produce leather products two factories have to work alongside each other.
At first, the animal skin dried before carrying out to the factory by a truck. Then in the corporation, it washed in the water with lime. After that, the leather is soaked in the lime and went through a flattening machine. This followed by another soaking which water plus vegetable matter are poured into a box and the animal skin soaked again in the tannin. Finally, the skin is polished via a specific instrument before it is transported in the separate factory by a lorry. At this factory, various goods are produced by leather involving shoes, purse, ball and etc. which the consumer could purchase. These final goods are produced from the same animal skin and only differ in terms of their shape and usage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...by leather involving shoes, purse, ball and etc. which the consumer could purchase. Thes...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9880239521 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45878209283 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0603241704 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292672055279 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13166338569 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.281782304438 0.0843802449381 334% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400034373083 0.15604864568 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.424457949647 0.0819641961636 518% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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