The importance of music to people. Is traditional music or international music more important?
In today's modern life, there are many different types of music. it is an art that uses voice and sound to express human emotions and feelings. music is one of the ultimate and indispensable sources of human entertainment.
music has the effect of reflecting intelligence and thoughts, as well as a strong and profound impact on people's emotions. it makes emotional vibrations deposited in the soul. Give wings to your imagination to fly, helping people to perceive and love life. Without music, the world would be very dull. music is extremely important for human happiness. it helps dispel suffering and brings joy, youth, full of life. Enjoying favorite songs helps people relax and have a lot of interesting experiences.
As time goes by, science and technology go up, international music emerges and traditional music gradually fades. but in terms of importance, traditional music should be preserved and valued more. Because folk music is the foundation, the basis for building up a professional and modern music scene. traditional music always has an important position and role in the lives of the people of that country. Associated with the human life cycle, folk music has been present from the moment a child is born until people return to the other side of the world. traditional music is like a link between humans and gods.
In the end, we can love and listen to any song we want. but traditional music will forever hold a particularly important position and role in the life of each ethnic group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9842519685 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75580427261 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5083916604 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61111111111 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55654844376 0.215688989381 258% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168107071748 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12812403238 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304868002676 0.15604864568 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160242990432 0.0819641961636 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.