The bar chart gives information on the percentages of foreign visitors who come to New Zealand and which kinds of public transportation they use.
As the bar chart shows the commonest transportation is car that nearly 70 percent of visitors use it, another two important public transportations are boat and coach with almost a third percent, the next important public transport is train including a fifth percent in chart and the last one with the one in twenty percent is boat.
Overall the visitors prefer to use car as the private transportation and in next level they prefer use coach and plane.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: saeed saamaadii
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 502.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 102.0 196.424390244 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92156862745 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17797182781 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90381498792 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 106.607317073 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 148.5 283.868780488 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4080975811 43.030603864 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268122539509 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203736357159 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645027306867 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203736357159 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645027306867 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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