It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There are some people believed that it is vital for a person to be harmed in both job and personal lives. Personally, I believed that benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
There are some reasons why I believed that taking risks in both lives are disadvantaged. Firstly, both of the lives be harmed might be damaged to the mental health. We can lost the control, be crazy, and overthinking, or even self-harmed if we can not balanced the risks by ourself. Secondly, this problems will be lead to the declined of physical health. The negative changes in the mental health might be lead to the unbalanced of hormone which might result in sleepless, tired, heart-attacked, etcetera.
Despite the aforementioned, I still believed that the benefits of taking risks do outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly, taking risks might help us to be more stable in front of the problems. We will have more experience to solved the problems and be calm in front of the unpredictable accidents. Secondly, it can help us to increased the finace. The more experience about the problems, the higher chance you can approach to the high-paid job. Last but not least, taking risks might help you improve all over our skill. Beside the problem-solving skill, the communication skill might be developed significantly in the taking risks process. For example, to solve the unpredictable accidents which our nener get before, the sense of communication might be the vital skill if around us have the helper.
Accordingly, taking risks is never unedequated for a person in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...be damaged to the mental health. We can lost the control, be crazy, and overthinking...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'balance'
Suggestion: balance
...king, or even self-harmed if we can not balanced the risks by ourself. Secondly, this pr...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...alanced the risks by ourself. Secondly, this problems will be lead to the declined o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01937984496 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96817494367 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1862954784 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9375 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215701458038 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877744230799 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880196955468 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171904195174 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727392430418 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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