Dear Jane and Zeneth,
How are you both? I am writing this letter to thank you from the bottom of my heart for the photos which you have sent me a day ago.
Earlier today I downloaded all the photos you sent to me; the quality of the pictures is spectacular, you both have an incredible talent for taking photos. I was extremely happy to join you guys for the Italy trip. I enjoyed seeing historic places, beaches, cathedrals and gardens of Rome. Moreover, spending time together after three years is incredible because we shared lots of memories with each other.
I was about to write a letter once back to London. However, on my return, I found that my relatives from India have come to attend the marriage ceremony of my cousin. So, being busy with them, I forgot to write back to you.
As my family members are here for another one month, I invite you both to come along with Angelina to my place so that you could feel the family warmth. I am sure we will have a magnificent time together again.
Hoping to meet you, buddies, soon.
With love,
Jenny
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51123595506 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18871242124 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.673935868 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7692307692 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274269512565 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925403124176 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836003855262 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134563001611 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100008793201 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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