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Leisure time in a typical week: by sex and employment status, 1998-99
The bar chart shows average number of hours devoted to spare time activities among men and women with five different occupational statuses in a week period, between the years 1998 and 1999.
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that, males generally had more free time than females.
According to the bar chart, the number of hours spent to leisure activities during the week among unemployed men were slightly higher than that of women, at 85 and 75 respectively. The pattern and corresponding figures for retired genders were the same. Turning to full time employed people, here...
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'males generally had more free time than females.' or 'males generally had less free time than females.'?
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 168 200
No. of Characters: 786 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.679 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.391 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.29 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.143 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.452 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.636 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4