The line chart illustrates the number of crimes occurring in the inner city for nine years, stated in 2003. It can be seen that the burglaries' intrusion into the house had observed a downward
tendency during the investigation time frame while car theft and robbery still maintained relatively consistent during the study period although there are some fluctuations
The line chart illustrates the number of crimes occurring in the inner city for nine years, stated in 2003. It can be seen that the burglaries' intrusion into the house had observed a downward
tendency during the investigation time frame while car theft and robbery still maintained relatively consistent during the study period although there are some fluctuations. In 2003, the number of burglaries breaking into the house was the highest in the three groups. It was nearly 3000 cases. This figure rapidly peaked about 3700 occurrences in 2004 before plummeting to more than 1000 cases after four years. In the rest of the period, it was still unchanging, oscillated around 1500 cases. In the early stage of car thefts recording, nearly 3500 cases exist and then declined in 2002 and 2006. The remainder of the phase had experienced a gradual increase in car theft, so at the end of the period, it got on top, marked the number of crimes was highest in 2012. Similarly, the robberies also fluctuated slightly, but never exceeded 1000 cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'burglaries'' or 'burglary's'?
Suggestion: burglaries'; burglary's
...stated in 2003. It can be seen that the burglaries intrusion into the house had observed a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tendency
...nto the house had observed a downward tendency during the investigation time frame whi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, similarly, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57929514204 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.012543534 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397525056201 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133982810633 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179221839465 0.0843802449381 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.445761204358 0.15604864568 286% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.285006253637 0.0819641961636 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.