The line graph compares the mean daily maximum temperatures for four cities, Auckland, Christchurch, London and Edinburgh, over a year.
It is clear that the daily temperatures in Auckland and Christchurch follow a similar pattern, while the temperatures in London and Edinburgh show an opposite trend. Moreover, Auckland has the highest temperature throughout the year, while Edinburgh has the lowest.
In January, Auckland’s temperature is nearly 25 degrees Celsius, while Christchurch’s temperature is about 22 degrees. Both cities experience a gradual decrease in their temperatures until July, when they reach their minimum values of around 10 and 12 degrees respectively. After that, their temperatures rise steadily until December, when they are both close to 22 degrees again.
Meanwhile, London and Edinburgh have their lowest temperatures in January, at about 5 degrees each. Their temperatures increase significantly until July, when they peak at roughly 22 and 18 degrees respectively. From August onwards, their temperatures drop sharply until December, when they are both around 7 degrees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81097560976 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17740269157 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0110011264 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196296143096 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102874279653 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870430427934 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160976252455 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926103685633 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.