The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Essay topics:

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Submitted by kallgou on Sat, 09/28/2019 - 09:54

The line graph illustrates data about the share price change of Outokumpu companies, between January 2006 and December 2010.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the share price reached a maximum of around 30 euros during mid 2006. However, In 2008, the share price of Outokumpu companies fell below 10 euros, which is least in the given period.

As regards, share price of Outokumpu started around 13 euros at the start of the period, then it sharply went up to 30 euros by mid 2006 which was maximum during the given period.

Since then the price significantly dropped to over 20 euros by June 2007 followed by a dramatic increase of around 10 euros by the end of 2007. From the start of 2008, share price plunged by nearly 25 euros, reaching the minimum value of over 5 euros in roughly 5 months. Subsequently, it gradually increased to 15 euros by early 2008, from then marginal increases and decreases, the stock price reached nearly the same value as it is at the start of the period in December 2006.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-10-14 koinoyokan 73 view
2019-09-28 kallgou 73 view
2019-08-22 fachryadul92 61 view
2019-08-22 fachryadul92 61 view
2019-06-08 Sidhulakhveer17@gmail.com 67 view
>>> More users practiced this topic >>>
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic
Essays by user kallgou :
>>> more essays by the user >>>

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... was maximum during the given period. Since then the price significantly dropped to...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67032967033 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36514689109 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8925275305 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409648632202 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20986355903 0.103423049105 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157473793659 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298629963715 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172352975615 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.