The line graph below shows the number of birds of different types sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014

Essay topics:

The line graph below shows the number of birds of different types sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014.

The given line graph illustrates how the number of three different kinds of birds; Kingfisher, Black Beak Pelican, and Flamingo changed over the time period of 13 years from 2001 to 2014 at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary.

Overall, there were maximum Flamingo birds all over the time, while Kingfishers remained at least count. Another important observation is that the number of all types of birds significantly increased over the mentioned time period.

To begin with, in 2001, there were almost 1000 and 3000, Black Beak Pelicans and Flamingo birds, respectively. In further 4 years, they increased with constant difference, and reached to approximately 7000 and 9000 in 2005, orderly. Although they declined in further three years, they continued to increase after 2008 and peaked at around 8000 and 12000, in sequence.

Moving to the Kingfishers, they followed somewhat different pattern. Although their rate of increment was slower than other two kinds of birds, they consistently increased all over the time. After beginning from 200 in 2001, they reached at just over 4000 in 2014.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (17 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, at least, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36994219653 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66676411775 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624277456647 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1675503207 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211656499335 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873167949257 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907105960045 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144111907002 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101938832635 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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