The chart illustrates how many African people used mobile and fixed line phones
between 1994 and 2004.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of people using both
communication services, with a much more significant rise being seen in the use of
mobile phones. In addition, the year 2001 marked the point where the figure for
fixed line service was surpassed by that of their mobile counterpart.
About 1.7% of residents in Africa subscribed to fixed broadband services, after
which this figure saw a gradual growth to just under 3% in 2001. The figure for
mobile services saw similar changes in the first two years, but then rose quickly
from just to reach 3% in 2001, overtaking that for fixed residential phone services.
The proportion of African people using fixed line phones continued to increase at
the same rate, reaching only 3.1% in 2004. Meanwhile, the figure for mobile
phones rose sharply to end the period at 8.8% (a threefold increase from 2001 to
2004).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0421686747 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4700925562 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.005493925 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234987089558 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125554766441 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662098322188 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894058307692 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652757641446 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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