The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
The line graph depicts that the proportion of visitors to four different sector of England that was attraction by Brighton between 1980 to 2010.
Overall, it is clear that festival was the most attracted place in 1980 which replaced by pavilion in 2010. While pier had the least visitors in started year that changed to art gallery ended year.
In terms of pavilion, during the period from 1980 to 1995, there was sharp increase from 23% to 48%, before experiencing a declined by about 17% in the year 2010. While, the trend for art gallery was similar. To explain, number of visitors accounted for about 21% in 1980. After increasing from 21% to 38% visitors, the percentage of tourists fell down to under 10% that was least preferred place among people.
Regarding pier, the figure of visitors stood at 10% in 1980. But the trend for pier was increase over the period with some fluctuations and ended up with 23% in 2010. By contrast, only 30% people visit to festival in 1980, then it decrease gradually by 5% until 1995 after that it increased slightly to 27% at the end of period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...roportion of visitors to four different sector of England that was attraction by Brigh...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...980 which replaced by pavilion in 2010. While pier had least visitor in started year ...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...eplaced by pavilion in 2010. While pier had least visitor in started year that changed to...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...ople visit to festival in 1980, then it decrease gradually by 5% until 1995 after that i...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73821989529 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37327018947 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9042785048 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11446038676 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04839224507 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992335322541 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104783576575 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134530424611 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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