The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
The bar chart illustrates the monthly expenditures of an American household in 2010. Units are measured in dollars.
Overall, there was a downward trend of monthly spending of the American family over the period given. At the start of the period, food constituted a largest amount of money spent, followed by gas and clothing, respectively. In contrast, at the end of the period, clothing spending made up the largest number of expenditures, followed by gas and food.
To begin with, the expenditure on food has experienced a drop during the given period. Specifically, the spending on food stood at 500 at the beginning of the period, after which there was a fluctuation of the food expenditure before reaching a low of roughly 300 in the final month.
Conversely, the pattern for gas and clothing was almost similar during the period given in which the expenditures on both gas and clothing have seen a dramatic rise. Indeed, the expenditure on gas was at about 300 at the beginning of the period, after which this figure has seen a significant oscillation before peaking at a high of almost 400 in the final mongth. Similarly, clothing spending was at approximately 200 in January, after that it has witnessed a considerable vacillation before reaching a peak of more or less 700 in the final month.
- Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their children, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- HIghest level of education of women in someland 67
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited.Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e start of the period, food constituted a largest amount of money spent, followed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, similarly, in contrast, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90950226244 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94669166163 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493212669683 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9093564504 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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