The line graph illustrates how many people traveled to Scotland and went to see four different places over the period of 30 years.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the trend of castle and zoo experienced gradual progress during 30 years, however, there was a moderate decline in the proportion of aquarium and festival at the same time. In addition, Castle was the highest percentage of the four attractions places between 1980 and 2010.
At the beginning of the period, Festival was the best place which attracted 30% of tourists visiting, nevertheless, a steady drop of more than 10% was witnessed in the proportion of visitors in 2010. Similarly, the number of people who visited Aquarium took 20% in 1980, reaching the vertex at about 35% and then substantially reduced to 25% during the last year.
In contrast, before touching the highest point at more than two-fifths in 1995, the number of tourists who visited Castle experienced a sudden drop of nearly 15% over the period of 15 years. In 1980, Zoo is the place that attracted visitors lowest, just 10% but in the next 30 years, the percentage of zoo rose twice as much as that in the beginning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, then, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60322339886 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3421758509 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13420934034 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688791436456 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397183487582 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915116596083 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323973479143 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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