The supplied line graph gives characteristics about birth rate, death rate and total the population size over three centuries, from 1700 to 2000. It is evident that the population and the birth rate in England and Wales obviously increased while the death rate hit a fall
Closer inspection of the diagram shows the population size in two country at the beginning 18th century was 3 million. At the same time, the death rate ocuppied approximately 27 million and the birth rate was 30 million which the figures for birth rate was almost 10 times that of total population. In 1850, whereas the population size increased to 10 million, the birth rate witnessed a drop to 32 million. The death rate in 1850 was approximately 27 million which remained stable as the figure at the beginning 18th century. From 1850 to 2000, the total population in England and Wales grown up substaintialy and it hit the highest point with 50 million. At the same time, the figure of birth rate fluctuated and it was smaller than total population by approximatly 20 million. Meanwhile, the death rate dropped insignificantly to 20 million which is the smallest figure than the others
- The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008 67
- In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 73
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 67
- The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008 67
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88383838384 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77189919743 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474747474747 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1671187084 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315915979704 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172575903399 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949190489536 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32590069811 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117329931724 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.