The line graph demonstrates the number of marriages and divorces in the UK over the period of 25 years

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The line graph demonstrates the number of marriages and divorces in the UK over the period of 25 years.

A quick glance at the given graph reveals that while the total figure of marriages increased, the figure of first marriages decreased. The number of divorces rose significantly during the shown period.

In 1975, the number of total mariage was nearly 500 thousands, which is over 150 thousands higher than that of first marriages. After 10 year, both figures experienced an upward trend and reached nearly 650 thousands and 400 thousands, respectively before slightly declining by 10 thousands in 1990. From 1990 to 2000, the number of first marriages continued falling dramatically by 100 thousands while that of total marriages remained stable in the last 10 years of the given period after going down by around 50 thousands.

Turning to the other two figures, in the first 15 years of the period, the figures for divorces grew gradually from around 80 thousands to nearly 250 thousands. The number of second marriages showed the same trend until 1985 when it stopped increasing and hovered around 250 thousands in 1990. Between 1990 and 2000, the data of divorces marginally rose by 10 thousands. At the same time, the number of second marriages declined by 10 thousands after reaching a peak of over 250 thousands.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reaching a peak of over 250 thousands.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07425742574 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64095339598 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2665630283 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22625167313 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110246237812 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524101055991 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178056448477 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334707349785 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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