Line graph show percentage of the tourist who were visited art jellery pavilian and pier in england.

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Line graph show percentage of the tourist who were visited art jellery pavilian and pier in england.

The line graph exhibits the percentage of the tourist who were visited art art " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">jellery pavilian and pier in england. Overall, the number of quality of visitors to pavilian was the most immense over the years.

Regarding to the visitors of festival, there began much higher than pier visitors, with a whopping 30 %in 1989. there was a hefty plunge in the quantity of visitors to almost 25%in 1995. In the following years. The quantity of the visitors surged to nearly 30%in 2010.looking at visitors of pavilian. Before reaching an astounding apex of nearly 50%in 1995.there was an impressive dwindle to nearly 25%in 1980.then,the quantity of visitors shrine widly to above 30%in 2010.

Looking at the quantity of pier visitors swell by leaps and bounds from 10%in 2010 to 20%in 2010.The quantity of art gallery visitors surged sizable hit nearly 39%in 1989 and then there was a widly shrink reaching the lowest point.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0463454147 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9858719205 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202496606637 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701792542517 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120274057715 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148765722312 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156024778114 0.0819641961636 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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