A line graph shows the amount of time to produce a vehicle by four US car manufactories between 1998 to 2002

Essay topics:

A line graph shows the amount of time to produce a vehicle by four US car manufactories between 1998 to 2002

The chart gives information about how much time is required to produce a car by 4 companies in the USA from 1998 to 2000. It is clear that General Motor reduced the hours needed for cars’ production over the years while lines for other manufactories showed marked fluctuations.
In 1998, General Motor took 32 hours to produce one car, which is the highest figure on the graph. Numbers decreased considerably for the next 17 years and reached 22 hours in 2005. Ford time rates started at 28 hours per car and rose slowly until hitting 31 hours in 2001, which was followed by a significant drop of 5 hours in 3 years and a dramatic decline from 26 hours in 2004 to just 22 in 2005.
Both Honda and Toyota’s average car production’s time were 22 hours in 1998. While the line for Honda went down until 1999, the opposite was true for Toyota’s. Patterns reversed for the two companies over the next 2 years. From 2001 to 2002, figures for Toyota and Honda moved upward to 24 hours before dipping again and achieving a low of 20 hours per car in 2005.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (5 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48186528497 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45789259455 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7937423272 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174967663519 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832742145984 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655724868935 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136500350235 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569153420531 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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