The line graph provides information regarding the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months period in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Overall, it can be seen that, over the period as a whole, the highest volume of gold were traded in March while June and August experienced least amount in gold trading.
To begin, Gold sales stood at 200 million dirhams per month in January 2002.However, there was a mild growth until February, which was followed by a noticeable upsurge, with the sales of gold reaching a peak of 350 million in March. From this point, Gold sales witnessed a progressive collapse to July, where, for the first time, it hit a low of nearly 100 million dirhams. Over the following next month, there was a gradual rise in the sales of gold to nearly 200 million but, for the second time, it plunged again to a low of around 100 million dirhams per month in August. Afterwards, the sales of gold increased gradually to around 190 million in October, and finally leveling off at this level for the remainder of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...llion dirhams per month in January 2002.However, there was a mild growth until February...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61956521739 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.439049057 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4127572272 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443472743968 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248578583745 0.103423049105 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189591655944 0.0843802449381 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358025096283 0.15604864568 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427995331022 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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