Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Many People decided that not to consume nay fish or meat in daily meals. They think that, being a vegetarian can make their health better as usual earth too. From my point of view, Even though it has lots of advantages, it can cause few drawbacks too.
First off all, there is no way to arguing that vegetable and fruits can help us to gaining a good health. Undoubtedly, Vegetarian gets a huge amount vitamin and mineral from different kind of fruits and vegetable. Moreover, they don’t have to worry about severe disease like high blood pressure, overweight et-cetera. For Example, One of my Bosses does not eat any meat or fish which gives him a great physical fitness at this 70 years old.
On the contrary, by all no means we can not say that for sure that, it will not effect in our body at all. As a consequence, if we don’t take any fish or meat then we will have lack in adequate amount of protein and we will not get enough amount of energy to do our work. For instance, my father tried to be vegetarian but he always felt tired and was not possible for him to perform any work.
On the other hand, Vegetarian people believe that if we eat fish and meat that will cause to increase global warming. Because every year thousands of food manufacturer use tons of clean water to process meat and fish, also this process release huge smoke to the environment. Overall, if we use fish and meat they face endanger with extinction. However, avoiding fish and meat we can prevent this type of problem
To conclude, it is not always good, if we only eat vegetable and skip fish and meat totally. We better eat small amount of fish and meat with our vegetarian food habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...not say that for sure that, it will not effect in our body at all. As a consequence, i...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...if we eat fish and meat that will cause to increase global warming. Because every year thou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48051948052 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36325278749 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4969215204 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22057999135 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768250397693 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460028337362 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125582258545 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239777915128 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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