The graph below provides information on the revenue of four categories of cafes in New York over the previous year.
Overall, at the beginning of the period, the profit of the Tea Room was the highest number compared to that of Cafe COol was the lowest. Most of the income for trends in cafes had an upward trend while Tea room had a downward trend for a period shown.
In January, the number of Tea Room had a significant income ($160,000).
By contrast, the profit of Cafe Cool was the lowest ($36,000), which is nearly five-time as low as Tea Room. There were wild fluctuations over the period shown. Last month, it was witnessed as steady fall in Tea Room, with over $40,000 in comparison with Cafe Cool had a significant increase ( exactly $120,000)
The remaining trends in cafe income had a similar trend over the year. Both the revenue for Wifi Cafe and Internet Express in January was 40,000 and 90,000, respectively. The figures for Wifi Cafe fluctuated, followed by a reach of the highest point of nearly $200,000 in December. Similarly, there was a substantial increase in profit for Internet Express ($135,000), after a gradual decrease in the middle of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith Cafe Cool had a significant increase exactly 20,000 The remaining trends in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69607843137 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49507396267 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5583129365 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215179591537 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964718796156 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118113171461 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152302247472 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13468735859 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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