The line graph represents the number of books borrowed from West Eaton,Rye Slip,Sutton Wood,Church Mount.It is interesting to note that,while the count dropped at Rye Slip,villages West Eaton and Church Mount surged up in the time frame.
In detail,while 300 books were borrowed at Rye Slip which was the highest among the four villages,it declined to around 170 books by September.On the other hand,West Eaton and Church Mount witnessed an upward trend starting off at just 50 books in July to 150 books during September.Meanwhile,however Sutton Wood faced a dramatic dip of reaching a scale of 100 books in August,but it managed to reach a peak of 300 books thus overcoming its initial stage of 250 books.
Focussing on the genre of books borrowed,43% of votes have been casted for Fiction followed by Biography(19%).However,
History(14%),Science(14%) and self-help(10%) sums up to a total of 38%.
It is clear that Fiction is the preferred type of books being rented.Also,except Rye Slip,the three villages have better rental rates.
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- the line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books by type that were borrowed over this time. summarize the information by selecting and 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Rye
...number of books borrowed from West Eaton,Rye Slip,Sutton Wood,Church Mount.It is int...
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Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sutton
... books borrowed from West Eaton,Rye Slip,Sutton Wood,Church Mount.It is interesting to ...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Church
...wed from West Eaton,Rye Slip,Sutton Wood,Church Mount.It is interesting to note that,wh...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...Eaton,Rye Slip,Sutton Wood,Church Mount.It is interesting to note that,while the c...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...rch Mount.It is interesting to note that,while the count dropped at Rye Slip,villages ...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , villages
...that,while the count dropped at Rye Slip,villages West Eaton and Church Mount surged up i...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...urged up in the time frame. In detail,while 300 books were borrowed at Rye Slip whi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... was the highest among the four villages,it declined to around 170 books by Septemb...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...clined to around 170 books by September.On the other hand,West Eaton and Church Mo...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , West
...170 books by September.On the other hand,West Eaton and Church Mount witnessed an upw...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...s in July to 150 books during September.Meanwhile,however Sutton Wood faced a dramatic di...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
... to 150 books during September.Meanwhile,however Sutton Wood faced a dramatic dip of rea...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... reaching a scale of 100 books in August,but it managed to reach a peak of 300 books...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ed for Fiction followed by Biography19%.However, History14%,Science14% and self-help10...
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Line 8, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...he preferred type of books being rented.Also,except Rye Slip,the three villages have...
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Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , except
...referred type of books being rented.Also,except Rye Slip,the three villages have better...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... books being rented.Also,except Rye Slip,the three villages have better rental rates...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29696969697 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77838811037 2.65546596893 142% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678787878788 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.981443967 43.030603864 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.5 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210396696023 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108387166157 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052946985109 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885889533604 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628127277697 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.2329268293 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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