The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
The provided graph computes the percentage of the population in New Zealand from 1950 to today and the projection of it up to the year of 2050
Overall, majority of the population belongs to the oldest age group. This number is predicted to still be the highest in 2050. Besides, It can be obviously seen that while the population of people who aged between 0 - 14 and those of the age group 37 - 64 experience and upward trend, there is a fall in the percentage of people in the other two age groups over the given period of time.
Over the initial 40 years of the given period, the population of the elderly rose gradually and peaked at nearly 70% in 1990. A dramatic increase occurred in the percentage of people whose ages are between 37 - 64 during the same period of time. The percentages of the two youngest age groups was seen a mild drop and there was only 2% of New Zealand's population belonged to the the age group of 0 - 14 in 1990. Until today, the percentage of people whose ages are below 14 has been recovering and reaches approximately 15% in 2020 whereas there were steady downturns observed in the other three age groups where in 2020, the population of those who are 25 - 37, 38 - 45 and over 65 are about 4%, 40% and 55% respectively.
Until 2050, the demographic of those aged 14 and below is expected to continue rising steadily and account for about a fifth of the total population whereas the percentage of the oldest age group and the age group of 25 - 37 is predicted to fall gradually to just above 50% and 0% respectively. There is also a constant fall expected on the population of the age groups 38 - 64 to about 35% in 2030 and a steady recovery to nearly 40% 20 years later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'trend' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'trends'.
Suggestion: trends
...age group 37 - 64 experience and upward trend, there is a fall in the percentage of p...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...the other two age groups over the given period of time. Over the initial 40 years of the gi...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ges are between 37 - 64 during the same period of time. The percentages of the two youngest ag...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... of New Zealands population belonged to the the age group of 0 - 14 in 1990. Until toda...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... of New Zealands population belonged to the the age group of 0 - 14 in 1990. Until toda...
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Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... where in 2020, the population of those who are 25 - 37, 38 - 45 and over 65 are about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 315.0 196.424390244 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4253968254 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55158701336 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453968253968 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.297502733 43.030603864 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.888888889 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202039190416 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107775997474 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122419477337 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20207549463 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183962278235 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.