The line graph gives information about the proportion of citizens in New Zealand, categorized into four age groups between 1950 and 2050.
Overall, the percentage of people aged 38 to 45 and 0 to 14 is predicted to be on the increase, while the opposite is true for the remaining groups. In addition, the over 65 age group has had the highest figures over the period shown.
The data of people at the age of 0-14 ranked lowest with 5% in 1950, followed by a slight growth to 10% in 2000, and a prediction of a progressive growth to 20% during the rest of the period. A similar trend has been recorded in the figure for inhabitants from 38-45 which is expected to rise substantially from 25% in 1950 to 40% in 2050.
The statistics of a 25-37 age group started at 20%, after which it underwent a steady decrease to 10% in 2000, before being anticipated to end the period at 2%. Moreover, the population of residents older than 65 was at 60% in 1950 and has declined insignificantly to 55% at the end of the period, despite a marginal upturn to 62% in 2000.
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- The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43367346939 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68196092639 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.5542939929 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201263199775 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881649135864 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102659258267 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12844156046 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109903038579 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.