The given chart depicts number of car heist per thousand cars in four nations during a decade from 1990 to 1999. The mentioned parameters are Unite Kingdom, Sweden, France and Canada.
It is clear from the data that, Britain's figures were far higher than any other countries. During 1990's UK's stolen car figure was 18 per thousand cars. But, after some fluctuations in the next few yers, the figures were topped at 21 cars in 1996. From 1997 onwards the number of car theft showed a gradual decrease and reached Great Britain's lowest figure of 17. Sweden also showed an increasing trend. From it's initial figure of 6 cars, it had reached it's not so high as figures of 15 within a period of 10 years.
France and Canada showed almost the same trend despite some fluctuations. They faced moderate threat from thief's during 1990's, the stolen vehicle figures were 7 and 8 respectively. In 1993 Canada's car theft was reached at it's lowest recorded number of 5 cars per thousand cars. Till the end of the priode the figures were at the same level. Whereas, France records showed some ups and downs and reached it's by far the highest figure of 7 in 1995. One important point to be noted that, at the end both the countries theft rate reached at the same level of 6 cars per thousand vehicles.
In conclusion, both Canda and France were able to reduce their car theft problem to a certain level. While, Britain's and Sweden's figures showed a high rate even after a decade.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'united'.
Suggestion: United
...0 to 1999. The mentioned parameters are Unite Kingdom, Sweden, France and Canada. ...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'During the 1990s'.
Suggestion: During the 1990s
...re far higher than any other countries. During 1990s UKs stolen car figure was 18 per thousa...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Britains the lowest'.
Suggestion: Britains the lowest
...ed a gradual decrease and reached Great Britains lowest figure of 17. Sweden also showed an inc...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nitial figure of 6 cars, it had reached its not so high as figures of 15 within a p...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1990s'.
Suggestion: during the 1990s
... They faced moderate threat from thiefs during 1990s, the stolen vehicle figures were 7 and ...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...t to be noted that, at the end both the countries theft rate reached at the same level of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62213740458 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25643548058 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4814183362 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6875 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112075602138 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420209353103 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405973204852 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800835881413 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320055458744 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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