The line graph provides an overview of the visits completed by the UK and overseas residents between 1979 and 1999, and further, the bar chart below illustrates the topmost countries which had been visited by UK residents during the year 1999.
In 1979, the number of visits to and from the UK, accounting for 10 million and 11 million respectively, but the visits of UK residents abroad exhibited a slight increase until 1984; subsequently, rose significantly to over 50 million in the year 1999. Regarding visits to the UK, the number of visitors escalated steadily, and they were just under 30 million in 1999.
Turning to the bar chart, France was visited by over 10 million UK residents, and it followed by Spain with almost 9 million UK visitors. The USA was higher than Greece and Turkey, which accounted for about 4 million, whereas Turkey had a very less number of UK visitors, there were less than 3 million tourists.
Overall, the UK residents were the highest for visiting abroad than the visits to the UK by overseas residents, and Spain had more visits from UK visitors as compared to other nations in the year 1999.
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 73
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working . In your letter· describe the work you ha 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82653061224 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59536959929 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6787266349 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.666666667 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332861886526 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195363943209 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107351685063 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243405810818 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964343437301 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.