The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given linear graph chart illustrates the information regarding the three countries such as Australia, Canada and European community. The wheat were exported there over a decade. The data is calibrated in millions of toon.
Overall,it is evident that the toon of wheat which were exported to Canada increased significantly as like mountain whereas, Australia had been decreased steeply with the less toon of wheat.
Having a quick glance, it is apparent that the maximum floor was exported to Canada during 1986 to 1988 inclined suddenly from 16 toon to 25 toon.However, the most dramatic export had been observed in the whole years the floor was exported to European community climbed dramatically by 4 toons divergent.
Turning towards the remaining of the information is that the last two year which floor exported at Canada plummeted quickly by 1 toon more than one in ten in the period of one year 1988 to 1989. Since 1998 to 1990 the one twenty wheat was exported to European community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...heat were exported there over a decade. The data is calibrated in millions of toon....
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...brated in millions of toon. Overall,it is evident that the toon of wheat which...
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Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'toon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'toons'.
Suggestion: toons
... 1986 to 1988 inclined suddenly from 16 toon to 25 toon.However, the most dramatic e...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'toon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'toons'.
Suggestion: toons
...88 inclined suddenly from 16 toon to 25 toon.However, the most dramatic export had b...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...clined suddenly from 16 toon to 25 toon.However, the most dramatic export had been obse...
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Line 13, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in the period of one year 1988 to 1989. Since 1998 to 1990 the one twenty wheat was ...
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Line 13, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 1989. Since 1998 to 1990 the one twenty wheat was exported to European community...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09036144578 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71646672438 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6743641485 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217906207895 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114775371839 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680673536356 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148052054636 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563256514095 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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