Look at the two maps of Sunnyhills University campus in 1955 and today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below illustrate the campus of Sunnyhills University between 1995 and today before and after the change. It is clear that the university made many renovations during this period, and many new facilities have been constructed or have been moved.
Before the renovation, there were two car parks on the campus, one in the upper left corner, and the other on the right side. The campus is covered by forest in the top right and the bottom left corner. The founder’s building is in the middle of the campus. Furthermore, to the left of it is the Watson building and the café on the right. The Scott library is between the Halls of Residence and the football pitch in a horizontal line. In addition, a football pitch, tennis courts, and a gym are next to each other to form a fitness area. They are in front of the second car park and cafe. The main reception is a part of the Watson building, it is on the left side of the student’s union, opposite the bus stop.
After the construction and development, there is a new pond in the bottom right corner, which is covered by a creation area. The cafe is bottom of the campus and in front of the laboratories. There are 2 halls of residence on the left side of the campus, close to the Watson building, and the art building. The main reception is on the top left of the campus, next to the car park. The student union is between the bus stop and the gym. The cafe is a part of the founder’s building, on the left of the Scott Library. There are some table tennis tables on the right side of the campus.
In summary, the renovations were mainly made to facilitate for everyone, save space, more convenient even though the number of trees has been reduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...been constructed or have been moved. Before the renovation, there were two ca...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dent’s union, opposite the bus stop. After the construction and development, ...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on is between the bus stop and the gym. The cafe is a part of the founder’s buildin...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les on the right side of the campus. In summary, the renovations were mainly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, so, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 316.0 196.424390244 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46202531646 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48487654431 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420886075949 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2518237385 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116363847186 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399736486675 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554531689589 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764054632705 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046334742958 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...been constructed or have been moved. Before the renovation, there were two ca...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dent’s union, opposite the bus stop. After the construction and development, ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on is between the bus stop and the gym. The cafe is a part of the founder’s buildin...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les on the right side of the campus. In summary, the renovations were mainly ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, so, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 316.0 196.424390244 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46202531646 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48487654431 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420886075949 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2518237385 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116363847186 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399736486675 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554531689589 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764054632705 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046334742958 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.