A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Over the past centuries, service industries such as tourism have been thriving and amending thanks to the advancement and revolution of human beings. While there is no denying that such development played a huge role in boosting the national economy, issues around pollution have also bothered local residents in many ways. However, it is clear that the demerits tourism brings about are eclipsed by the merits it offers.
Reasonably observed by local people in Hanoi, the capital city of Vietnam, the pollution rate in the region has emerged dramatically due to a boom in holiday makers appealing to visiting places of interest. It is not hard to acknowledge the increase in litter and emissions left by tourists being the catalyst for a dense and contaminated atmosphere throughout the surroundings. This not only gives rise to the deterioration in the quality of citizens’ life but also causes severe degradation to tourist attractions as well as landscapes around the city.
Despite the mentioned drawbacks, an influx of travelers in a certain country surprisingly appears to have positive influences since a growth in economical profits was observed over the past decades. From a poor country where the majority of citizens could not manage to make ends meet around the years of the 70s, Vietnam has taken advantage of its glamorous scenery and its long coastline as a key to develop wonderful tourist destinations for foreign visitors. As a result, the country apparently seems to be flourishing rapidly and relying significantly on tourism as its main source of income.
All things considered, even though the state of ill-managed tourism might lead to pollution-related problems, there is no doubt that it guarantees the prosperity of a country where it is well developed. Therefore, I am of the opinion that the aforementioned issue is at the expense of greater benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'demerits'' or 'demerit's'?
Suggestion: demerits'; demerit's
...any ways. However, it is clear that the demerits tourism brings about are eclipsed by th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23026315789 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03688087178 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 106.607317073 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 283.868780488 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6309583967 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.545454545 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142579833486 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515282873582 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611382147169 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746421276069 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280259957489 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 40.7170731707 251% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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