Essay topics:
Lunar New Year is coming. What are you planning during Tet.
While Lunar New Year is coming, I have many plans for Tet. Before Tet, I plan to go shopping with my mother for clothes, cakes, candy, tea, fruit, etc. In addition, I will help my parents clean the house and prepare for Tet. Especially, I am going to watch the fireworks on the New Year's Eve with my family and wishes together On the first day of Tet, I visit pagoda to pray a good starting the coming year. Also, I wish my relatives and friends. Moreover, I plan to go a trip with my family or play cards with my friends on the rest of Tet. I am looking forward to the upcoming Tet to do activities I have planned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e house and prepare for Tet. Especially, I am going to watch the fireworks on the...
^^
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s Eve with my family and wishes together On the first day of Tet, I visit pagoda ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 495.0 965.302439024 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09090909091 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26361810873 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 154.8 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3349554903 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7142857143 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258698241819 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131626992246 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143415557098 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258698241819 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.2329268293 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 11.4140731707 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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