Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? why?
In my opinion, I disagree with that. We know that animals have emotions, especially for sensitive species such as dolphins. If we sympathy on dolphins.., we will be able to understand how they sad ... Because it is not free, as separate from his family and fellow human beings under pressure with training to perform the show.
Where dolphins belong that’s about the vast oceans or large rivers. they have grown and developed so over thousands of years.
How poor this animal is!
We should not profit the intelligence in dolphins magic is used for the purpose to entertain and make money. Wild animals are not meant to become a pet or to swim with or need training… we should be living in a natural environment, not to be bothered and protected
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... as dolphins. If we sympathy on dolphins.., we will be able to understand how they...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... about the vast oceans or large rivers. they have grown and developed so over thousa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 626.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7786259542 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62366324353 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732824427481 0.547539520022 134% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.114634146341 1745% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0640499692 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.25 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0765261324185 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332665644439 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339285179735 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364647609562 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259627844414 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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