Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
There is an old adage – ‘where there is a will, there is a way’. Success does not come easy – it comes after sheer hard work, dedication and perseverance. Moreover, a lot depends on an individual’s will power and knowledge. Thus, inner thoughts affect success more than the outer environment. Either from village or a metropolitan city, nothing can stop an individual who wants to mark a name in the pages of history.
Once successful every individual goes back to its roots – where he belonged to and where he came from. Successful and accomplished individual proudly give a lot of credit of their success to their town, culture, friends and family. This is because, that is the place where they have spent their childhood and formative years. Knowledge and the strong values instilled in them by their parents and teachers have played a major part in their success.
More than often, the people who are doing well play a major role in the reconstruction of their hometowns. They want to provide for the facilities such as building schools, libraries and colleges - for younger generation which were not available to them while they were growing up. Moreover, they share technological advances via such mediums.
Developing such platform, where exposure meets the will power to succeed; where individuals has opportunities to reach their full potential will indeed keep on producing successful people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, still, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21120689655 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88605468537 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650862068966 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4153087044 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872484156951 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332857128444 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312128213663 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465751713214 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311395889723 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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