Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Nowadays, there are many factors contribute to becoming a successful person. Regions are one of the factors. The factors are hard-work, creativity, capability, determination etc. In this essay, we discuss regions affect successful persons.
Firstly, native regions have varied influence over the population are from the rural or urban region. People are bound to follow the things are going in their regions. Urban regions people have an excel opportunity to follow their dreams. They are good access to the opportunity, environment and people look forward to as compared the rural regions. For example, Indian cricketers are majorly from metro-cities, urban people are more influence from their life and access to their life, therefore, it helps to get motivated and follow their dreams. On the other hand, urban regions are no opportunity or environment to follow. They think only the survival. It exemplifies, that native regions influence the successful persons.
Secondly, many people belong from small cities. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani is a small place in Gujarat and for the poor family and become a founder of reliance industries by his determination. Narendra Modi our prime minister is also belonged from a small place in Gujarat, work harder to climb the ladder of politics. It exemplifies, that hard-work, determination are the factors to become a successful person.
In conclusion, native regions and influence of another factor just a factor to become a successful person they have determination, hard-work etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44957983193 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92038570013 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516806722689 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1634857859 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2941176471 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366514178376 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138182348979 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115184833207 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220884460671 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830593351796 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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