the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010 summarise the information and make comparison where relevant

The two maps represent the changes that have been taken place in the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 respectively.

In 1930’s map, there was a river named River Stoke. A farmland was located at the right hand side of the river. However, it had been removed and replaced by housing areas. One of the buildings that remained unchanged from 1930 to 2010 was post office. There were shops situated next to the post office. It is noticeable that these shops were removed as the place was used to construct a road and more houses were built in which these changes were shown in the map of 2010.

Another feature that had been changed was the Gardens which was located at the centre of the map in 1930. There was a tree in the Gardens before the houses were built to replace it. Besides, the Large house was located inside the Gardens in 1930 was a Retirement home in 2010. The other farmland was located at the top right hand corner of the map in 1930 had also been removed. The other building was the Primary school which was just situated opposite the post office. There was no change on this building but two houses were built next to the Primary school which can be seen on the 2010’s map.

To sum up, the constructions that remained unchanged were the River Stoke, the Bridge, the Post Office, and the Primary school. Other constructions had changed in which most of the changes were done to build more houses as can be seen on the 2010’s map.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: IN_1990s[2]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'In the 1930’s'.
Suggestion: In the 1930’s
...d in 1930 and in 2010 respectively. In 1930’s map, there was a river named River Stok...
^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'so', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22491349481 0.268076937826 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.217993079585 0.116061578633 188% => Less verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.0484429065744 0.0759168565197 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0138408304498 0.0366838410393 38% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0103806228374 0.0131127313244 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114186851211 0.155750635184 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0934256055363 0.0379272487307 246% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.19641128453 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242214532872 0.0210936926555 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00692041522491 0.00175180941692 395% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.141868512111 0.0948980150116 149% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00692041522491 0.00437022459523 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0311418685121 0.00967000014798 322% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1471.0 1161.00487805 127% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.9 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50936329588 5.90752243213 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73763899035 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262172284644 0.337110787985 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205992509363 0.247514529752 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.101123595506 0.171178102325 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0411985018727 0.112407865282 37% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.19641128453 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423220973783 0.546246751206 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.0321142755 49.3433353143 79% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 8.93414634146 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4872446695 42.9750493124 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 135.714022679 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 38.3992509363 47.7609492067 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.78571428571 2.94281807926 61% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385810264186 0.418131533498 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.191315792962 0.181151798455 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0859379766529 0.0850326197045 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.61747127986 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189845831817 0.157042692854 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196674360009 0.228904883108 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863950925217 0.108899403657 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.512074709639 0.367819155151 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104488669828 0.0812612215331 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31965072403 0.316326947829 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03790773421 0.0921553760075 41% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.08536585366 269% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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