the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010. summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps of village of Stokeford from 1930 and 2010 shoes how the village changed in the course of 80 years.

We can see from these maps that even though few things remaind the same in the 80 years, Stokeford was definitely modernized and there was a significant increase in the population by looking at the number of new houses.

In 1930, Stokeford had a large farmland area to the east of River Stoke and next to the primary school which in 2010 was replaced by new houses and roads to accommodate new settlers. Also for this purpose, shops next to post office was also removed. The gardens were also shrunked to add few more houses and roads. The addition of new houses reflects the idea of growing population in Stokeford. The large house inside the garden was extended so that it can be converted to a retirement home.

In 80 years, few of the things remained the same like the bridge over river stoke and the post office. However, the primary school changed significantly by expanding and adding few more blocks.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and roads to accommodate new settlers. Also for this purpose, shops next to post of...
^^^^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dea of growing population in Stokeford. The large house inside the garden was exten...
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248730964467 0.268076937826 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.137055837563 0.116061578633 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0913705583756 0.0759168565197 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406091370558 0.0366838410393 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.010152284264 0.0131127313244 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142131979695 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0507614213198 0.0379272487307 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41890787166 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0304568527919 0.0210936926555 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121827411168 0.0948980150116 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010152284264 0.00437022459523 232% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152284263959 0.00967000014798 157% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1028.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6174863388 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31693989071 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213114754098 0.247514529752 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142076502732 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0819672131148 0.112407865282 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41890787166 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 47.465312089 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3333333333 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1464521842 42.9750493124 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 41.6448087432 47.7609492067 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.35135135135 2.94281807926 80% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423931705755 0.418131533498 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162221225719 0.181151798455 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783932088048 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.670138262613 0.706616315825 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224231538925 0.157042692854 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228361478684 0.228904883108 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119245459548 0.108899403657 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381219676049 0.367819155151 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00973942848408 0.0812612215331 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33658587742 0.316326947829 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627558381962 0.0921553760075 68% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.