The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The maps above show us clearly the planned change in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to present.

In 1995, there was a large farmland located in the northeast, to the south of which there was a forest park. To the west of the forest, beside the road crossing northwest to the southeast, there was the only residential area. In the south along the seaside, there was a shop and a fish market, which were isolated by another road cross the west to the east. Where the two roads crossed, there located a hotel. In addition, there was also a fishing port at the offshore area in the south.

The village has obviously witnessed great change in the following years, for that at present, the layout is totally different. In the northeastern part, where there once to be a farmland and a forest parks, there is a golf court and a tennis court. Furthermore, a new road has been build near the residential area and there certainly appears to be more housings. The shop has be replaced by a restaurant and the fish market has be changed to apartments. It is also notable that the fishing port is gone and a new parking lot has been constructed beside the hotel. The only thing remains unchanged was the cafe opposite to the hotel.

In conclusion, the village of Ryemouth has experience a great change and the whole area seems to emphasize tourist industry rather than agriculture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...pears to be more housings. The shop has be replaced by a restaurant and the fish m...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...by a restaurant and the fish market has be changed to apartments. It is also notab...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.268076937826 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.116061578633 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0882352941176 0.0759168565197 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0367647058824 0.0366838410393 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00735294117647 0.0131127313244 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0955882352941 0.155750635184 61% => OK
Participles: 0.0441176470588 0.0379272487307 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5437905713 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0367647058824 0.0210936926555 174% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.172794117647 0.0948980150116 182% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.00967000014798 152% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1377.0 1161.00487805 119% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.9 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62040816327 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297959183673 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224489795918 0.247514529752 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14693877551 0.171178102325 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0897959183673 0.112407865282 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5437905713 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489795918367 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.0949180637 49.3433353143 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8461538462 23.0094962315 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9715365364 42.9750493124 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 135.714022679 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 23.0094962315 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.689975730869 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 41.295133438 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.96153846154 2.94281807926 67% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472808976991 0.418131533498 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165288485953 0.181151798455 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0890939470608 0.0850326197045 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.678067970395 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17286183504 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246938316735 0.228904883108 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106226668713 0.108899403657 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443964161139 0.367819155151 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0923191419601 0.0812612215331 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377632879397 0.316326947829 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627957529878 0.0921553760075 68% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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