The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school(s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map provided gives data on two alternative sites for a new school to be built in the territory of Canterbury town.

As is observed from the map, it is clear that both locations have similar patterns: both are within easy reach of the housing area, the main road, which helps the town residents from long distance traveling. While S1 is located in the countryside, S2 is in the heart of the town centre.

Looking closely at the map, S1 is outside in the town to the northeast of Canterbury, it has the advantage of being close to the town residential area and the main road which makes it easy for townies and people from Sturry to get to the school. On the other hand, While S2 having the similar patterns to S1, it is also an ideal site for population coming from both Chartman and Sturry. Since the existence of S2 is in the no traffice zone which means reaching it by transporting vehicle is impossible, this becomes the only downside of S2 compared to S1.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4802259887 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50367281041 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3524063514 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28371783725 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143874681364 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138657706795 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228704758324 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125838875162 0.0819641961636 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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