The map billow is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new super market. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map highlights not only the town of Garlsdon but also shows two possible sites for a new supermarket.
Here two places is indecate for making the supermarket. One of them is on the country side and the another is on the town center where is no traffic zone. We can see in main roads as well as railway accrose behind S1 site but in S2 site the railway goes over it. There have some industries as well as housing near both of the sites too. The Hindon where almost 10000 people live is very near from the S1 part. On the other hand the S2 part is also near from Bransdon and Cransdon too. Near about 15000 and 29000 people live to those area.
At the sum the two possible sites are different from eachother.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...ar about 15000 and 29000 people live to those area. At the sum the two possible sites a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 585.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30147058824 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11579524833 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5094152642 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.0 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236166872874 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09596233054 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108659173764 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206467549446 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117029713403 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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