The given maps illustrate developments that have occurred to the art gallery in an Australian art gallery since 1950.
Overall, it can be seen that the art gallery has become significantly enlarged with the courtyard being demolished to make way for new facilities involving a new children art school, Australia Aboriginal Art and Australian Art. However, several rooms in the right and the center of the original building have remained unchanged.
Looking at the maps for more detail, to the West of the art gallery, the toilet has been destroyed to give way to a new construction of toilet. The temporarily exhibition and bookshop located to the south of the original temporarily have still stayed the same. Moving to the East, there has been no change in the early European art, middle European art and Asian art.
To the north of the art gallery, there have been a new construction of a new children art school, Australia Aboriginal Art and Australian Art, replacing the courtyard. Visitors have still entered into the main entrance in the center of the south side of the building, leading to the large room. This room displaying sculpture has been the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...displaying sculpture has been the same.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7336656611 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505102040816 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.337996035 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267063037733 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108263671677 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124629435285 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201576326106 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110643381644 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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