The maps illustrate locations of buildings of a small town which is named Islip now, and plans for its improvement.
It can be seen that, considerable changes are being planned and many buildings will be built in Islip town.
Nowadays, the main road separates two columns of shops which are near the countryside. According to plan, shops which are near the town centre will not be changed when shopping centre will be made instead of northern shops. In addition, people may go to school easily after making dual carriageway around the town. In the centre of the town there are a lot of houses now, and constructors are going to built new houses these area again which are near the parking areas. Specifically, new houses will be built in north-eastern part of the town where is easy to access.
In improvement strategy, builders will construct new places for the population of the Islip town. The main feature is that the number of new houses will be increased twice and bus station, shopping centre and car parking areas will be made by architects. The cars will not be allowed in the main road in order to only pedestrians can utilize this road after development. However, location of school and some shops will be the same as today, going there will be more accessible and comfortable and there will be many buildings in Islip town.
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year 89
- Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contributions to the company by giving them extra money this practice can act as an incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others To what extent is this style of management ef 81
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 92
- Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times Do you think this a positive or negative development 92
- In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...uses now, and constructors are going to built new houses these area again which are n...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...structors are going to built new houses these area again which are near the parking areas....
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77253218884 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5716070632 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502145922747 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7023733208 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155942509987 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846737840151 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11555098641 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167032476231 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149417282893 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.