The diagrams illustrate the depelopment of Islip town in the future counting from now.
It can be seen clearly that there are still not much facilities evolved nowadays, especially the existence of the countryside area on top of the first map. In the center, the main road is surrounded by shops running along 2 sides of the street. Besides, it is also constructed housing, park and school by the south of the town.
On the flip side, the second map shows us a more complex structure of entire Islip town centre. It seems that people will invest for a dual carrigeway with all necessities located in the heart of the road and the countryside will vanish in this period. According to the plan, main road will be changing into area for pedestrians only. Although there still have shops in one side of the street, the other will be filled with dense service systems consisting of bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing. Things keep sustainable in the south pinprick.
In conclusion, changes into dual carriageway and infrastructure make this project a significant evolution of Islip town centre.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for yo 56
- The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- 2 A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for y 89
- Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate What do you think about this type of requirement Give details to support your opinion Paragraph about 180 300 words 84
- The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features a 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e seen clearly that there are still not much facilities evolved nowadays, especially...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8835978836 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68431841511 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4158384795 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142069049456 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572678712662 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469853155426 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913028023107 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217510462068 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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