The maps show how the centre of small town named Islip will change after a development plan. Overall, the town centre will look completely different with many new changes in infrastructure.
The current town centre is close to the countryside, which is to the north. There is a main road on east-west direction crosses the town, with 2 short lanes heading to the south side of the town. The lane in the west, leading to the housing area, curves a little in front of a school while the eastern one links main road with a park. There are two ranges of shops being along the side of the main road.
If developed, the town will be covered by a cycle of dual carriageway while the main road is planned to be restricted to pedestrian traffic only. Also, the plan shows that the northern row of shops will be reconstructed to a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park from west to east respectively while another one will remain unchanged. The school and park will remain as they are now exist; in contrast, 2 new residential areas will be built on the right of the car park and on the left of the park.
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 89
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releva 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...ol and park will remain as they are now exist; in contrast, 2 new residential areas w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40975609756 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48097580158 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3429740544 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1587161841 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807873301179 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067458996436 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123909590739 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544286092156 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.