The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The infographic depicts the transformation of the City of Nelson before and after various facilities are constructed.
Overall, this city has become much more modern and developed with some new facilities such as a hall of residence and a restaurant.
A quick glance at the maps reveals that there is a construction of a hall of residence in the north west of this city and a train station under this place has been developed to new train station with extra trainline which is located between a university and a city centre. Moreover, there are some trees near the university have been cut down and replaced to a new shopping centre.
Turning to the other set of maps, in the south west of Nelson City, old market has been developed to a new shop. And the City centre next to this has been used for bike rental schme. In addition, it is a new covered market has been erected, which in front of new shopping centre. A restaurant and a bars have been built in the opposite part of a pedestrians street, which have been used for all transports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bar' or simply 'bars'?
Suggestion: a bar; bars
...f new shopping centre. A restaurant and a bars have been built in the opposite part of...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60106382979 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62644795048 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0360357581 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0609598799645 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294183045577 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280777714289 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449466584385 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205603350854 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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