The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st Century.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate how the town of Lakeside changed in the early years of the 21st century
Overall, this town underwent some significant transforms due to the redevelopment and the addition of infrastructures.
On the left-hand side of the river, the residential area and the arts centre nearby were destroyed and replaced by the shopping centre and the new multi-screen cinema respectively. In addition, a small car park was erected on the original site of the Derelict warehouses and the old town next to this warehouses was also knocked down to make room for triangular area of the offices and a new university. Meanwhile, the schools and the residential area in the northwest corner stayed unchanged.
In the opposite side, about half of the woodland area was cut down and residential area in the north of Lakeside was also demolished to make way for the huge extension of industrial complex. At the same period, the lake at the beginning of the river was also narrowed into the small pond.
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| 2022-01-20 | Vuthungan | 41 | view |
| 2021-06-04 | BHAVANI KESIREDDY | 11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ict warehouses and the old town next to this warehouses was also knocked down to mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91715976331 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91865367367 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6226081536 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12843937713 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632791734902 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655150392243 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973080880389 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827794655189 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.