The map depicts that the alternations that taken place at the seaside resort of templetion and the period taken into consideration is 1990 and 2005.
A glance at the map apparently delineates that there were many things constructed newly in year 2005.
Commencing with year , In 1990 ,In the left side of beach,there were many houses and tress on the both sides and at right side,it was divided into two parts whereas on the one side had a school and another side had aa hospital and opposite to the school had many houses and opposite to hospital had parking and near at parking had railway sation and also had small railway line at the corner.
Moving towards, 2005 there were many changes taken place therefore, on the left direction of beach had added supermarket and some new houses and big buildings and also planted some tress and another side of beach made airport and big factory and railway line extended and at the edge of sea bulit a ferrry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ewly in year 2005. Commencing with year , In 1990 ,In the left side of beach,ther...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ar 2005. Commencing with year , In 1990 ,In the left side of beach,there were man...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ear , In 1990 ,In the left side of beach,there were many houses and tress on the both ...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ress on the both sides and at right side,it was divided into two parts whereas on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, so, therefore, whereas, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70414201183 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35770840592 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.476327403 43.030603864 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.75 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.25 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.23603664747 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209319838811 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180054035574 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143225402359 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180054035574 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143225402359 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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