The two figures describe the changes that have taken place on the beach resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
In 1990, the place was full of individual houses and trees, but after 15 years it was changed. In 2005, it can be seen that the beach totally changed. On the left- hand side was build some blocks of flats by the lake, but the trees were cut down, between two roads were constructed some individual houses instead of a few trees. In the bottom left- hand corner of the beach a lot of block of flats situated and opposite of them was located a supermarket. On the right- hand side of seaside was a school in 1990 and it was left but we saw an airport next to it after 15 years. Then the hospital also was remained and some houses were added. in the middle of two roads some houses and trees demolished, but the car parking was remained. At the bottom of the seaside was transformed. in1990 there wasn't a factory but after some years it was set up, and railway lines were expanded.
To conclude, the seaside resort of Templeton was absolutely changed from rural place to urban view.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: rufik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun block seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of blocks'.
Suggestion: a lot of blocks
...e bottom left- hand corner of the beach a lot of block of flats situated and opposite of them ...
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Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...as remained and some houses were added. in the middle of two roads some houses and...
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Line 2, column 782, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In1990
... bottom of the seaside was transformed. in1990 there wasnt a factory but after some ye...
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Line 2, column 795, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...e seaside was transformed. in1990 there wasnt a factory but after some years it was s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38916256158 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23418430514 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507389162562 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0517916685 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194742792478 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936764404874 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126410073344 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245977000433 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144082165157 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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