The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
he maps below illustrate an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site.
Generally, all project also have farmland but in the different site. Many services for human appear in planned future. The town and river still in same site.
Norbition industrial area now maintained many factory. Farmland is in the middle of this town but the river crosses between farmland and town. A roundabout here has two way, one way go to work on factory, another way go to the path to go to the town.
Focus on planned future development of Norbiton town. In this project, no factory appear in this town and housing appeared instead. The roundabout have 4 way to go and in this town have 2 roundabout. Many building also addicted in this project such as: Playground, school, shops and medical. The second roundabout also have the path to go to the town. The farmland in this project has a little different, because the path on the town crosses the river. That's why the farmland appear in the east site.
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- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 81
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he maps below illustrate an industrial are...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factory seems to be countable; consider using: 'many factories'.
Suggestion: many factories
...orbition industrial area now maintained many factory. Farmland is in the middle of this town...
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Line 7, column 454, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...the path on the town crosses the river. Thats why the farmland appear in the east sit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71270718232 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5177493301 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469613259669 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9066428294 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9285714286 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181138620096 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863375895134 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116005749734 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174040061914 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151405789654 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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