The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The given maps below illustrates the changes that will take place in the norbiton town in the future.
Overall, it is clear that the town which is at the moment in an industrial site, will be converted into residential area over the following years, with the addition of school, playground, shops and medical facilities.
Town in the current state consists of a roundabout in the middle, which is surrounded by factories to the north and west side. The road which is located on the east side, has the industries on north and south side, while the southern road is attached with the roundabout through a T-junction. Moreover, there is a river on the northern side, and at the far north, there are fields for agriculture.
Moving on to its planned development, additional roundabout will be built at the junction of the southern road with the main road and a new road will originate from the original roundabout on the north-west side, which will provide access to newly built accommodations at the western side. The south-western and south-eastern location will be taken over by the shops and medical center. The area around eastern road is to be for housing, a school at the end and playground at the north by demolishing factories. Finally, the farmland at the far north will be stretched and moved to the east, whereas the west part will be reserved for residences which would be visited through a newly constructed bridge over the river.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87044534413 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77361917596 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493927125506 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6059595633 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107866152611 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576652444812 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745268738647 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111304567977 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829735242986 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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